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I'm Sorry

April 8th 2010 01:03


I’m sorry for what I said last night,
The words just shot from my lip.
Like Satan’s darts into your heart,
My tongue is now a bloodied whip.

I’m sorry for the tone of my voice last night.
I can’t believe the words I spoke.
I sadly regretted all that I said
When this morning I awoke.


I told you I didn't love you last night,
I told you I'd met someone new
I said some pretty harsh words last night
Daggers thrown directly at you.

I’m sorry that we fought last night.
I know you’re sorry too.
When I said it I thought it had merit
Because my heart was black and blue.


But I’m sorry for how I reacted last night,
When you finally told me the truth.
I was hurt, my heart burnt,
That you took the named girls words as proof.

I’m sorry for how unforgiving I was last night.
I was trapped in violent rage.
My thoughts went wild, my hate unfiled,
Like an animal breaking out of its cage.

I’m sorry we let other people cause the fight last night.
People who’s words stab backs like knives.
It was wrong…. but you and I are strong
And know she’s means nothing in our lives.

I sit slumped in the corner with my head down low
And as my mind is in flashback mode
I want you to know you mean the world to me
And I’m sorry for last night, so sorry baby.




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Comment by Anonymous

April 8th 2010 07:11


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I felt it. Nice work.

Comment by Journeywoman

April 8th 2010 07:55


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Beautiful writing.... and that puppy is a tad gorgeous too.

Comment by sam sall

April 8th 2010 21:23


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I felt it too, I'm speachless...

Comment by Blondini

April 9th 2010 00:01


1 For The Road
Blondini
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Thankyou so much for your kind words.

I was forgiven!

Comment by Dianna G

April 9th 2010 02:04


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I really like this poem. Very much from the heart.

Comment by Blondini

February 20th 2012 02:07


1 For The Road
Blondini
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We broke up 2 years ago, thank goodness! It was poison.

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